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Let's commit the perfect crime:
I'll steal your heart,
you steal mine

Oh
ooh
my

If you were booger,
I'd pick you first
If looks could kill,
you'd be a weapon of mass des-truct-ion
my dear.

...

Why walk away
Why all the hate
I just want you to notice me

May not be no Shakespeare, dear
but I can shake my way into your heart

I'd try
for you
(I'd try)

...

Love

love-da-da-da-da-da-dove
La-da-da-da-da-da-dove
Love
Love
Oh, ooh, ooh, oh

Hey there, darling
:iconnyatto:
hey there darling, also known as the cheesy pickup line song by yours truly~ it's a WIP, heh.
I wrote this specifically for my acoustic guitar >//> just gotta write in the chords and make a strum pattern. hope you like it. i'm new to writing song lyrics and constructive criticism would be very appreciated.
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:iconbootsandpatches:
~bootsandpatches Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, I could very easily see this becoming popular! :) I loved it!
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!natalierosalinda Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is cute c:
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=whalebutt Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww <3

i like the booger part XD
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:iconbarkis1:
Very nice!
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~crashmypartyhard Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrazycryplz:

i'm so proud of you

you did more literature
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*CeeNova Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How lovely! I love writing songs and poetry. :3

The way I sing it out loud sounds absolutely lovely! The words seem to hold a good rhythm and flow.

Constructive criticism... I don't think I have any for ya! ^-^ I'd love to hear you sing it~
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